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Introduction Introduction
Resolutions are the primary tools for action at the United Nations. Debate at the United Nations focuses on solving, at least in part, the many problems facing the global community. After months of debate and behind-the-scenes discussion on a topic, Member States try to come to an agreement about how to proceed on an issue. This agreement is then codified in the form of a draft resolution. The text of a draft resolution is usually developed and agreed upon well in advance of its being brought to the floor, with many States making suggestions and changes behind the scenes. When a draft resolution is brought to the floor, it may be formally discussed, amended, rejected or adopted as circumstances dictate. It is very rare for a United Nations resolution to be rejected after being brought up for consideration; most Member States prefer to bring a draft resolution to the floor only if they are sure it will be adopted. In fact, sponsoring Member States will often wait to bring a resolution to the floor until they are sure that all Member States present will agree to the resolution and adopt it by consensus.
Resolutions usually express a policy that the United Nations will adopt or implement, and they may be included in the body of reports, treaties, conventions and declarations. Resolutions range from general to very specific in content and, depending on the body involved, may call for or suggest a course of action, condemn an action or require an action or sanctions on behalf of Member States. The General Assembly, Economic and Social Council, special committees and commissions may either call for or suggest actions. However, only the Security Council can require action from or place sanctions on Member States. In some cases, conventions and treaties may also require action, but such requirements would be applicable only to the States Parties (i.e., those States which have ratified or are otherwise party to the convention or treaty).
Resolutions are formal documents adopted by a United Nations body that follow a standard format and include at least one preambular and one operative clause. Any body may issue a resolution, but in practice most are adopted (often by consensus) by the General Assembly, its main Committees and the Security Council.
Presidential statements are similar to resolutions in that they state a United Nations policy or objective, but they have a different purpose and utilize different formatting. Presidential statements offer a less formal pronouncement of some United Nations action or position and are often used when the Security Council cannot come to agreement or deems that the issue does not necessitate a formalized resolution.
Draft Documents Draft Documents
AMUN simulations will accept draft resolutions and other documents only during the AMUN Conference. Draft documents may not be submitted in advance of Conference. Drafting documents is a collaborative process that begins with an idea about how to approach a problem and then incorporates ideas and concepts contributed by a group of delegations. The authors of draft documents obtain signatures from sponsors through caucusing and discussion, and eventually the draft may be moved to the floor for debate. The debate process brings the entire body into the discussion. Often, the debate identifies areas where the draft must be amended to bring about a final document that the body may support by consensus.
In preparing to attend AMUN, delegations should consider solutions they believe would help resolve the issues before the body. The most successful delegates will practice drafting clauses that clearly articulate the background and context for the topic and that form the policies they would like to advocate for. Delegates should also practice reviewing and commenting on the work of others and practice negotiation, collaboration, and amendment to achieve common objectives. These notes and practice documents may be useful at Conference as working papers. When all delegations arrive at Conference prepared and ready to work together, the entire body benefits.
At Conference, when a delegate is asked to sponsor a resolution, they should ask themselves the following questions: Was this document drafted in collaboration with other delegations in attendance? Has the resolution drafting and amendment process been open and collaborative? If a delegate cannot answer yes to these questions, they should consider either working with the drafters to bring the draft document into the collaborative environment or, if that is not an option, foregoing sponsorship in favor of working on other draft documents that represent the collaborative work of the body.
AMUN strongly discourages delegations from bringing pre-written resolutions, that is fully-formed draft resolutions a delegation brings to the conference with the intent to immediately circulate the draft for signatures and bring it to the floor, foregoing the collaborative process. Any draft document that is not created with the input and assistance of other committee members will not reflect the will of the body and cannot hope to achieve consensus. While bringing these resolutions may seem an efficient way to jump-start the body’s deliberations, in reality they short-circuit the collaborative and consensus-building process that is central to AMUN’s educational mission and that reflects the real work of the United Nations.
Draft resolutions are not eligible for formal consideration on the floor of General Assembly Committees, ECOSOC, ECOSOC Commissions, or Special Committees until they receive the sponsorship of at least 35 percent of the total delegations registered for their respective simulation. In the Security Council and the Historical Security Councils, only one sponsor is required. In all bodies additional sponsors may be added as the document is written until the document has been moved to the floor; at that point, a delegation may only become a sponsor with the consent of the original sponsors. Once a substantive vote has been taken on a draft resolution —or on a contested amendment thereto—no new sponsors may be added to or removed from the draft resolution, as it has become the property of the body.
Chairs and presidents will entertain motions for a suspension of the meeting to facilitate the process of discussing, creating, combining and changing draft documents. It is recommended that representatives use this time to discuss the problems facing their committee and begin creating documents or combining existing drafts as proposed by members of the body. These sessions offer representatives an opportunity to enter the United Nations political process of working with others in an attempt to build consensus, but in a less formal setting.
The process of using drafts and requiring more than one sponsoring delegation is intended to replicate the United Nations practice of gaining near-universal support for drafts before they are brought to the floor for debate and decision. Further, it should push delegations away from looking at a proposal as “theirs” and toward working with others to find a solution and to gain consensus on the topic being discussed. AMUN requires a relatively high number of sponsors in order to encourage the body to work together on proposals, rather than individual delegations or small blocs working on separate proposals in isolation. States that sponsor (or sign) a resolution should be in general agreement with its content at the time it is submitted, such that they would vote “yes” on the resolution. This sponsorship, however, is non-binding. Member States may exercise their sovereign right to vote in any way on any matter that affects the outcome of the resolution.
To this end, representatives will need to work together and most likely combine clauses from a number of drafts or subsequent proposals made by other Member States at the Conference. Representatives are strongly encouraged to undertake this process before a draft is brought to the floor. As with the United Nations in New York, building support for one draft that encompasses the entire topic will be a much better use of the representatives’ time than trying to work on multiple draft resolutions, many of which will overlap. AMUN suggests that representatives not contend over which draft will come to the floor, but rather caucus and compromise to determine how best to combine drafts into a coherent, whole product that all Member States can accept, either through friendly amendments or through the drafting of a new, all-encompassing document. Rapporteurs are available in General Assembly committees and special committees to assist with this process.
After a draft resolution or presidential statement receives the requisite sponsorship, representatives submit the draft document to the Dais Staff for approval. The Dais Staff will review the draft and discuss with representatives any necessary or suggested edits. Once representatives have entered all necessary edits, the Dais Staff will approve the draft document and submit it for formal publication to the body. The body will not formally act on a draft resolution until the entire body has been given the ability to review it.
After an approved draft has been formally published, the Dais Staff will announce that the draft has become available for consideration. Although AMUN strives to publish draft resolutions as quickly as possible, they may be subject to a delay, depending largely on the publishing needs of the rest of the Conference.
Points to Consider in Writing Draft Resolutions Points to Consider in Writing Draft Resolutions
The following list includes important points to consider when writing a draft resolution. This is by no means an exhaustive list, but should provide a good starting point to make draft resolutions as realistic as possible.
- In the preambular clauses, describe the recent history of the situation and the issue as it currently exists.
- Refer to specific past United Nations actions and previous resolutions passed on the topic, when available.
- In the operative clauses, include actions or recommendations that will address or solve the problem, not just make a statement.
- Avoid using blatantly political language in the content of the draft resolution—this may damage efforts to reach a consensus on the issue.
- Take into account the points of view of other States whenever possible.
- Write the draft resolution from an international or United Nations perspective, not just from a single country’s point of view.
- Consider whether the substance of the draft resolution is within the purview of the committee and refer relevant parts to other bodies where appropriate.
- Refer issues which need further discussion to appropriate, existing bodies.
- Do not create new committees/councils/commissions/working groups/etc. without first considering if other similar bodies already exist.
- Always consider previous United Nations resolutions on the topic; do not duplicate what other resolutions have done without referencing the appropriate sources.
Purview and Other Content Requirements for Resolutions Purview and Other Content Requirements for Resolutions
As noted above, one point to consider when drafting a document is whether the document’s content is within the purview of the committee. Each body within the United Nations has a particular purview, or subject-matter jurisdiction, over which that body is particularly concerned. A body will not address subject matter that is outside its purview, because another body almost always has purview over that subject matter. The topic briefs for each simulation identifies the purview for each United Nations body simulated at AMUN. Rapporteurs in the committees and Simulation Directors in the Security Councils will review submitted documents to determine whether they are within the purview of the body. If possible, Dais Staff will offer suggestions as to how to modify a draft document to bring it within the purview of the body, rather than simply rejecting a submission.
As part of our educational mission, AMUN strives to simulate the United Nations as realistically as possible, within the confines of a three-day simulation. Accordingly, for all simulations outside of the Security Council and Historical Security Council simulations, AMUN limits the topics that may be discussed. These topics are identified in depth within this handbook. In committees with limited agendas, Rapporteurs will not accept resolutions unless they are directed to one of the topics for the simulation and can assist in migrating work in this direction as needed.
The Dais Staff will not accept draft resolutions or other documents that it views as disruptive to the work of the body or the Conference as a whole. Disruptive resolutions and other documents are those that are only tangentially related to a topics for that simulation or contain language, proposals or solutions that are generally not seen in actual United Nations resolutions. Such disruptive resolutions detract from the educational experience of all AMUN’s participants. Accordingly, the submission of disruptive resolutions is considered diplomatically discourteous, and will be addressed by the Dais Staff in accordance with Rule 2.2, Diplomatic Courtesy. Decisions of the Secretariat on these matters are final.
Draft Resolution Guidelines and Format Draft Resolution Guidelines and Format
Draft resolutions will consist of the standard heading section followed by preambular and operative clauses. Preambular clauses are listed first; they are used to justify action, denote past authorizations and precedents for action, or denote the purpose for an action. Operative clauses are the statements of policy in a resolution. Each operative clause is numbered, begins with a verb to denote an action (or suggested action) and usually addresses no more than one specific aspect of the action to be taken.
Draft resolutions must comply with the following formatting requirements:
- During the processing of draft resolutions, do not use italics, bold or underlined print to highlight words. Italic text should only be used as shown in the Sample Draft Resolution.
- Clauses must begin with proper introductory words/phrases in italics.
- See the Sample Draft Resolution for additional requirements.
In 2020, Dais Staff will have the responsibility for inputting resolutions into the Conference’s DPS system, which produces final versions of resolutions. Representatives can help to speed up the resolution approval and input process by making their draft resolutions conform as closely as possible to the formatting and style of a final draft resolution. Dais Staff may instruct representatives to make certain edits to their draft resolutions to assist with this process. Additionally, Dais Staff are available to assist representatives with any questions you may have about format and grammar.
Sample Draft Resolution Sample Draft Resolution
Draft Resolution Guidelines
- All preambular and operative phrases are italicized.
- The first word of all clauses, sub-clauses and sub-sub-clauses is capitalized. In a clause with a two-word introductory phrase (e.g., Further noting) both words are italicized, but only the first is capitalized.
- All preambular clauses begin with an “ing” form verb (e.g., Acknowledging, Recalling), or other appropriate phrase (e.g., Alarmed by).
- All operative clauses begin with a verb that demonstrates action (e.g., Requests, Calls upon).
- All words should be spelled according to standard American usage, except in formal program or organization names or titles (e.g., World Food Programme).
- Acronyms and initialisms are appropriate in resolutions, except when referring to the United Nations and its principal organs (e.g., the General Assembly, the Economic and Social Council), which should always be spelled out in full.
- Acronyms and initialisms are written out in full the first time they are used within a resolution, followed by the abbreviation in parentheses (e.g., African Development Bank (ADB)).
- Full dates should always be used, including in reference to resolutions (e.g., 9 October 1977 or resolution 61/171 of 19 December 2006).
- In Security Council resolutions, the year the resolution was passed should be in parentheses along with the full date (e.g., resolution 1757 (2007) of 30 May 2007).
- When referencing a resolution, use the short resolution number instead of the full document symbol (e.g., resolution 61/171 instead of resolution A/Res/61/171).
- Whole numbers under 10 are written out, except in fractions, in lists or comparisons, in percentages, vote counts, ratios, etc.
- Numbers between 10 and 999,999 should be written in figures, except at the beginning of a clause/sentence.
- Millions, billions and trillions, are written as follows: 1 million, 4.3 billion, etc.
- Isolated references to weights and measurements are spelled out (e.g., ten kilometers).
- Generally, do not use a comma before the final element of a list.
- Lists of sponsors and/or authors are not required in the final version of documents. Once passed, they become the work and property of the whole body.
Amendments Amendments
An amendment is a written statement that adds to, deletes from or otherwise modifies a draft resolution or other document. An amendment may be as small as changing the word “and” to the word “or” in a sentence, or as large as the deletion or addition of numerous clauses in a document. Both preambular and operative clauses in draft resolutions may be amended.
Member States typically propose informal changes to draft documents during the drafting process. If a sponsor of a draft document does not approve of the proposed changes, they will not be incorporated into the draft document. However, the proposed changes may be introduced via a formal amendment after the document is officially introduced to the body for discussion. Otherwise, a sponsor may choose to withdraw its sponsorship from the draft document into which the proposed changes are incorporated.
Once a document is approved by the body’s Dais Staff, amendments must be made through a formal process. This involves entering the proposed changes on an Amendment form (available in each simulation) and submitting it to the appropriate Dais Staff for approval. See the Sample Amendment Form. A minimum of 15 percent of delegations must sponsor each amendment, although only one sponsor is required in the Security Council and Historical Security Councils. If all of the sponsors of a resolution are also sponsors on an amendment, an amendment is considered “friendly” and automatically becomes part of the draft resolution without a vote. If all of the resolution sponsors have not agreed to the amendment, it must go through the standard amendment process. This includes moving the amendment to the floor, discussion and voting procedure. If the body takes any substantive vote on an amendment or any part of the draft resolution, the document becomes the property of the body and the friendly amendment process is no longer available. Any subsequent amendments must be voted on by the body to be incorporated into the resolution.
Formally submitted amendments should be written legibly, provide exactly what language is to be amended and identify where the current language exists in the draft document or where the newly proposed language should go.
Sample Amendment Sample Amendment
Resolution Introductory Phrases Resolution Introductory Phrases
The following phrases/words are a partial list of appropriate introductions in resolutions.
Preambular Phrases Preambular Phrases
(single verb in present participle or other introductory phrase):
Affirming
Emphasizing
Keeping in mind
Alarmed by
Expecting
Noting with approval
Approving
Fulfilling
Noting with concern
Aware of
Fully alarmed
Noting with regret
Bearing in mind
Fully aware
Noting with satisfaction
Believing
Fully believing
Observing
Confident
Fully deploring
Reaffirming
Convinced
Guided by
Realizing
Declaring
Having adopted
Recalling
Deeply concerned
Having considered
Recognizing
Deeply convinced
Having examined
Seeking
Deeply disturbed
Having heard
Taking into consideration
Deeply regretting
Having received
Viewing with appreciation
Desiring
Having studied
Welcoming
Operative Phrases Operative Phrases
(verb in third person present indicative tense):
Accepts
Emphasizes
Reaffirms
Affirms
Encourages
Recommends
Approves
Endorses
Regrets
Authorizes
Expresses its appreciation
Reminds
Calls
Expresses its hope
Requests
Calls upon
Further invites
Solemnly affirms
Condemns
Further proclaims
Strongly condemns
Confirms
Further recommends
Supports
Congratulates
Further reminds
Takes note of
Considers
Further requests
Transmits
Declares accordingly
Further resolves
Urges
Deplores
Has resolved
Welcomes
Designates
Notes
Draws the attention
Proclaims
Lending Emphasis to Resolution Phrasing Lending Emphasis to Resolution Phrasing
Diplomatic communication relies heavily on connotation and nuance, and United Nations resolutions and decisions are no exception. When resolutions are constructed, they often contain language that actually conveys the very precise attitudes and intentions of the authors. At AMUN, representatives are urged to select words carefully when drafting resolutions. The introductory phrases listed above also carry significant emotional and diplomatic meaning. Accurate use of these introductory terms is of paramount importance at the United Nations, and should also be emphasized in AMUN simulations.
A more useful method for listing introductory phrases, rather than the alphabetical listing above, might be in order of the phrases’ emotional weight, described by United Nations practitioners as crescendos. Each of the following crescendos begins with a neutral phrase at the top (conveying little emotion) and concludes with a strongly worded phrase (conveying strongly positive or negative emotion). Some of these opening phrases also have common uses in the language of United Nations resolutions; when applicable, this information has been included parenthetically with each phrase. Some phrases that express strong insistence or negative emotion are typically only used in Security Council resolutions and even then are selected with great care—these are noted where appropriate.
Sample Preambular Phrase Crescendos Sample Preambular Phrase Crescendos
All lists of sample phrase crescendos presented below start with the most neutral/weakest phrase and end with the strongest phrases.
Noting (by being neutral, this term actually can connote negativity; for example, a resolution “noting the report of the Secretary-General” actually insults the Secretary-General’s work by not being more approving)
Noting with appreciation (this is the typical way to recognize a report or other document)
Noting with satisfaction
Noting with deep satisfaction
Alternatively, there can be further detail added to connote a more negative context for the point that is about to be made as shown in the following example:
Noting
Noting with regret
Noting with deep regret
Sample Operative Phrase Crescendos Sample Operative Phrase Crescendos
Notes (See comments on “noting” above)
Notes with appreciation
Notes with satisfaction
Welcomes
Recommends (suggests that other United Nations organs take an action)
Invites (suggests that Member States take an action)
Requests (suggests that the Secretary-General take an action)
Appeals (suggests that Member States take an action, more emotional)
Calls Upon (suggests that Member States take an action, very emotional)
Urges (strongest suggestion by the General Assembly)
Demands (rarely used outside of the Security Council)
Notes with concern
Expresses its concern
Expresses its deep concern
Deplores
Strongly deplores
Condemns (rarely used outside of the Security Council)
Commonly Misunderstood Terms Commonly Misunderstood Terms
Declares (used to make a statement)
Decides (used to indicate an action to be taken)
For sample usage of the phrases, see the Sample Draft Resolution and the Checklist for Resolution Formatting.
Security Council Presidential Statements Security Council Presidential Statements
While the General Assembly and other United Nations bodies usually speak through resolutions, the Security Council has another option: the presidential statement. At the United Nations, the Security Council adopts presidential statements more frequently than resolutions.
A presidential statement is a written statement issued by the President, noting that the Council has been discussing a specific topic and stating the general course of that discussion. These documents are frequently made at the beginning of or after a significant event in a crisis situation, but can be used at any point in the simulation. These statements can be as short as a sentence or two in length, but they can be longer if the situation dictates. Presidential statements are usually simple enough that they are agreed to by the entire body. This also means they often do not prescribe action and have little weight, unlike resolutions, which are technically binding on Member States. Presidential statements are often used when Members want to make a strong statement, but when one or more Member States, often Permanent Members, find it politically inexpedient to pass a binding resolution on the subject.
At AMUN, presidential statements are not written by the body’s President as they are at the United Nations in New York. Instead, presidential statements are written by the Council as a whole; the Council must enter an informal session and reach consensus to adopt a draft presidential statement. While draft statements, like draft resolutions, may be constructed by individuals or small groups during suspensions, AMUN recommends that representatives collaborate as much as possible on the creation of presidential statements and suggests entering into a consultative session for this purpose. For more information, please see Security Council Rule 7.7 Consultative Sessions.
Representatives are free to circulate unofficial drafts, but a draft statement cannot be adopted until it has been entered into the AMUN Document Processing System and has received approval by the Dais Staff and copies have been distributed to the Council. To adopt an approved draft statement, the Council must enter a consultative session. Once it appears consensus on the statement has been met, the president will ask if there is any objection to consensus on the document. If there are no objections to consensus, the statement will be adopted. If there are objections, the Council may wish to discuss the draft further and make changes. Once consensus is reached, the statement is considered adopted; the Dais Staff will update the document with any agreed to changes and copies of the final presidential statement will be made available to the Council.
Sample Security Council Presidential Statement Sample Security Council Presidential Statement
Topics
Introduction Introduction
Resolutions are the primary tools for action at the United Nations. Debate at the United Nations focuses on solving, at least in part, the many problems facing the global community. After months of debate and behind-the-scenes discussion on a topic, Member States try to come to an agreement about how to proceed on an issue. This agreement is then codified in the form of a draft resolution. The text of a draft resolution is usually developed and agreed upon well in advance of its being brought to the floor, with many States making suggestions and changes behind the scenes. When a draft resolution is brought to the floor, it may be formally discussed, amended, rejected or adopted as circumstances dictate. It is very rare for a United Nations resolution to be rejected after being brought up for consideration; most Member States prefer to bring a draft resolution to the floor only if they are sure it will be adopted. In fact, sponsoring Member States will often wait to bring a resolution to the floor until they are sure that all Member States present will agree to the resolution and adopt it by consensus.
Resolutions usually express a policy that the United Nations will adopt or implement, and they may be included in the body of reports, treaties, conventions and declarations. Resolutions range from general to very specific in content and, depending on the body involved, may call for or suggest a course of action, condemn an action or require an action or sanctions on behalf of Member States. The General Assembly, Economic and Social Council, special committees and commissions may either call for or suggest actions. However, only the Security Council can require action from or place sanctions on Member States. In some cases, conventions and treaties may also require action, but such requirements would be applicable only to the States Parties (i.e., those States which have ratified or are otherwise party to the convention or treaty).
Resolutions are formal documents adopted by a United Nations body that follow a standard format and include at least one preambular and one operative clause. Any body may issue a resolution, but in practice most are adopted (often by consensus) by the General Assembly, its main Committees and the Security Council.
Presidential statements are similar to resolutions in that they state a United Nations policy or objective, but they have a different purpose and utilize different formatting. Presidential statements offer a less formal pronouncement of some United Nations action or position and are often used when the Security Council cannot come to agreement or deems that the issue does not necessitate a formalized resolution.
Draft Documents Draft Documents
AMUN simulations will accept draft resolutions and other documents only during the AMUN Conference. Draft documents may not be submitted in advance of Conference. Drafting documents is a collaborative process that begins with an idea about how to approach a problem and then incorporates ideas and concepts contributed by a group of delegations. The authors of draft documents obtain signatures from sponsors through caucusing and discussion, and eventually the draft may be moved to the floor for debate. The debate process brings the entire body into the discussion. Often, the debate identifies areas where the draft must be amended to bring about a final document that the body may support by consensus.
In preparing to attend AMUN, delegations should consider solutions they believe would help resolve the issues before the body. The most successful delegates will practice drafting clauses that clearly articulate the background and context for the topic and that form the policies they would like to advocate for. Delegates should also practice reviewing and commenting on the work of others and practice negotiation, collaboration, and amendment to achieve common objectives. These notes and practice documents may be useful at Conference as working papers. When all delegations arrive at Conference prepared and ready to work together, the entire body benefits.
At Conference, when a delegate is asked to sponsor a resolution, they should ask themselves the following questions: Was this document drafted in collaboration with other delegations in attendance? Has the resolution drafting and amendment process been open and collaborative? If a delegate cannot answer yes to these questions, they should consider either working with the drafters to bring the draft document into the collaborative environment or, if that is not an option, foregoing sponsorship in favor of working on other draft documents that represent the collaborative work of the body.
AMUN strongly discourages delegations from bringing pre-written resolutions, that is fully-formed draft resolutions a delegation brings to the conference with the intent to immediately circulate the draft for signatures and bring it to the floor, foregoing the collaborative process. Any draft document that is not created with the input and assistance of other committee members will not reflect the will of the body and cannot hope to achieve consensus. While bringing these resolutions may seem an efficient way to jump-start the body’s deliberations, in reality they short-circuit the collaborative and consensus-building process that is central to AMUN’s educational mission and that reflects the real work of the United Nations.
Draft resolutions are not eligible for formal consideration on the floor of General Assembly Committees, ECOSOC, ECOSOC Commissions, or Special Committees until they receive the sponsorship of at least 35 percent of the total delegations registered for their respective simulation. In the Security Council and the Historical Security Councils, only one sponsor is required. In all bodies additional sponsors may be added as the document is written until the document has been moved to the floor; at that point, a delegation may only become a sponsor with the consent of the original sponsors. Once a substantive vote has been taken on a draft resolution —or on a contested amendment thereto—no new sponsors may be added to or removed from the draft resolution, as it has become the property of the body.
Chairs and presidents will entertain motions for a suspension of the meeting to facilitate the process of discussing, creating, combining and changing draft documents. It is recommended that representatives use this time to discuss the problems facing their committee and begin creating documents or combining existing drafts as proposed by members of the body. These sessions offer representatives an opportunity to enter the United Nations political process of working with others in an attempt to build consensus, but in a less formal setting.
The process of using drafts and requiring more than one sponsoring delegation is intended to replicate the United Nations practice of gaining near-universal support for drafts before they are brought to the floor for debate and decision. Further, it should push delegations away from looking at a proposal as “theirs” and toward working with others to find a solution and to gain consensus on the topic being discussed. AMUN requires a relatively high number of sponsors in order to encourage the body to work together on proposals, rather than individual delegations or small blocs working on separate proposals in isolation. States that sponsor (or sign) a resolution should be in general agreement with its content at the time it is submitted, such that they would vote “yes” on the resolution. This sponsorship, however, is non-binding. Member States may exercise their sovereign right to vote in any way on any matter that affects the outcome of the resolution.
To this end, representatives will need to work together and most likely combine clauses from a number of drafts or subsequent proposals made by other Member States at the Conference. Representatives are strongly encouraged to undertake this process before a draft is brought to the floor. As with the United Nations in New York, building support for one draft that encompasses the entire topic will be a much better use of the representatives’ time than trying to work on multiple draft resolutions, many of which will overlap. AMUN suggests that representatives not contend over which draft will come to the floor, but rather caucus and compromise to determine how best to combine drafts into a coherent, whole product that all Member States can accept, either through friendly amendments or through the drafting of a new, all-encompassing document. Rapporteurs are available in General Assembly committees and special committees to assist with this process.
After a draft resolution or presidential statement receives the requisite sponsorship, representatives submit the draft document to the Dais Staff for approval. The Dais Staff will review the draft and discuss with representatives any necessary or suggested edits. Once representatives have entered all necessary edits, the Dais Staff will approve the draft document and submit it for formal publication to the body. The body will not formally act on a draft resolution until the entire body has been given the ability to review it.
After an approved draft has been formally published, the Dais Staff will announce that the draft has become available for consideration. Although AMUN strives to publish draft resolutions as quickly as possible, they may be subject to a delay, depending largely on the publishing needs of the rest of the Conference.
Points to Consider in Writing Draft Resolutions Points to Consider in Writing Draft Resolutions
The following list includes important points to consider when writing a draft resolution. This is by no means an exhaustive list, but should provide a good starting point to make draft resolutions as realistic as possible.
- In the preambular clauses, describe the recent history of the situation and the issue as it currently exists.
- Refer to specific past United Nations actions and previous resolutions passed on the topic, when available.
- In the operative clauses, include actions or recommendations that will address or solve the problem, not just make a statement.
- Avoid using blatantly political language in the content of the draft resolution—this may damage efforts to reach a consensus on the issue.
- Take into account the points of view of other States whenever possible.
- Write the draft resolution from an international or United Nations perspective, not just from a single country’s point of view.
- Consider whether the substance of the draft resolution is within the purview of the committee and refer relevant parts to other bodies where appropriate.
- Refer issues which need further discussion to appropriate, existing bodies.
- Do not create new committees/councils/commissions/working groups/etc. without first considering if other similar bodies already exist.
- Always consider previous United Nations resolutions on the topic; do not duplicate what other resolutions have done without referencing the appropriate sources.
Purview and Other Content Requirements for Resolutions Purview and Other Content Requirements for Resolutions
As noted above, one point to consider when drafting a document is whether the document’s content is within the purview of the committee. Each body within the United Nations has a particular purview, or subject-matter jurisdiction, over which that body is particularly concerned. A body will not address subject matter that is outside its purview, because another body almost always has purview over that subject matter. The topic briefs for each simulation identifies the purview for each United Nations body simulated at AMUN. Rapporteurs in the committees and Simulation Directors in the Security Councils will review submitted documents to determine whether they are within the purview of the body. If possible, Dais Staff will offer suggestions as to how to modify a draft document to bring it within the purview of the body, rather than simply rejecting a submission.
As part of our educational mission, AMUN strives to simulate the United Nations as realistically as possible, within the confines of a three-day simulation. Accordingly, for all simulations outside of the Security Council and Historical Security Council simulations, AMUN limits the topics that may be discussed. These topics are identified in depth within this handbook. In committees with limited agendas, Rapporteurs will not accept resolutions unless they are directed to one of the topics for the simulation and can assist in migrating work in this direction as needed.
The Dais Staff will not accept draft resolutions or other documents that it views as disruptive to the work of the body or the Conference as a whole. Disruptive resolutions and other documents are those that are only tangentially related to a topics for that simulation or contain language, proposals or solutions that are generally not seen in actual United Nations resolutions. Such disruptive resolutions detract from the educational experience of all AMUN’s participants. Accordingly, the submission of disruptive resolutions is considered diplomatically discourteous, and will be addressed by the Dais Staff in accordance with Rule 2.2, Diplomatic Courtesy. Decisions of the Secretariat on these matters are final.
Draft Resolution Guidelines and Format Draft Resolution Guidelines and Format
Draft resolutions will consist of the standard heading section followed by preambular and operative clauses. Preambular clauses are listed first; they are used to justify action, denote past authorizations and precedents for action, or denote the purpose for an action. Operative clauses are the statements of policy in a resolution. Each operative clause is numbered, begins with a verb to denote an action (or suggested action) and usually addresses no more than one specific aspect of the action to be taken.
Draft resolutions must comply with the following formatting requirements:
- During the processing of draft resolutions, do not use italics, bold or underlined print to highlight words. Italic text should only be used as shown in the Sample Draft Resolution.
- Clauses must begin with proper introductory words/phrases in italics.
- See the Sample Draft Resolution for additional requirements.
In 2020, Dais Staff will have the responsibility for inputting resolutions into the Conference’s DPS system, which produces final versions of resolutions. Representatives can help to speed up the resolution approval and input process by making their draft resolutions conform as closely as possible to the formatting and style of a final draft resolution. Dais Staff may instruct representatives to make certain edits to their draft resolutions to assist with this process. Additionally, Dais Staff are available to assist representatives with any questions you may have about format and grammar.
Sample Draft Resolution Sample Draft Resolution
Draft Resolution Guidelines
- All preambular and operative phrases are italicized.
- The first word of all clauses, sub-clauses and sub-sub-clauses is capitalized. In a clause with a two-word introductory phrase (e.g., Further noting) both words are italicized, but only the first is capitalized.
- All preambular clauses begin with an “ing” form verb (e.g., Acknowledging, Recalling), or other appropriate phrase (e.g., Alarmed by).
- All operative clauses begin with a verb that demonstrates action (e.g., Requests, Calls upon).
- All words should be spelled according to standard American usage, except in formal program or organization names or titles (e.g., World Food Programme).
- Acronyms and initialisms are appropriate in resolutions, except when referring to the United Nations and its principal organs (e.g., the General Assembly, the Economic and Social Council), which should always be spelled out in full.
- Acronyms and initialisms are written out in full the first time they are used within a resolution, followed by the abbreviation in parentheses (e.g., African Development Bank (ADB)).
- Full dates should always be used, including in reference to resolutions (e.g., 9 October 1977 or resolution 61/171 of 19 December 2006).
- In Security Council resolutions, the year the resolution was passed should be in parentheses along with the full date (e.g., resolution 1757 (2007) of 30 May 2007).
- When referencing a resolution, use the short resolution number instead of the full document symbol (e.g., resolution 61/171 instead of resolution A/Res/61/171).
- Whole numbers under 10 are written out, except in fractions, in lists or comparisons, in percentages, vote counts, ratios, etc.
- Numbers between 10 and 999,999 should be written in figures, except at the beginning of a clause/sentence.
- Millions, billions and trillions, are written as follows: 1 million, 4.3 billion, etc.
- Isolated references to weights and measurements are spelled out (e.g., ten kilometers).
- Generally, do not use a comma before the final element of a list.
- Lists of sponsors and/or authors are not required in the final version of documents. Once passed, they become the work and property of the whole body.
Amendments Amendments
An amendment is a written statement that adds to, deletes from or otherwise modifies a draft resolution or other document. An amendment may be as small as changing the word “and” to the word “or” in a sentence, or as large as the deletion or addition of numerous clauses in a document. Both preambular and operative clauses in draft resolutions may be amended.
Member States typically propose informal changes to draft documents during the drafting process. If a sponsor of a draft document does not approve of the proposed changes, they will not be incorporated into the draft document. However, the proposed changes may be introduced via a formal amendment after the document is officially introduced to the body for discussion. Otherwise, a sponsor may choose to withdraw its sponsorship from the draft document into which the proposed changes are incorporated.
Once a document is approved by the body’s Dais Staff, amendments must be made through a formal process. This involves entering the proposed changes on an Amendment form (available in each simulation) and submitting it to the appropriate Dais Staff for approval. See the Sample Amendment Form. A minimum of 15 percent of delegations must sponsor each amendment, although only one sponsor is required in the Security Council and Historical Security Councils. If all of the sponsors of a resolution are also sponsors on an amendment, an amendment is considered “friendly” and automatically becomes part of the draft resolution without a vote. If all of the resolution sponsors have not agreed to the amendment, it must go through the standard amendment process. This includes moving the amendment to the floor, discussion and voting procedure. If the body takes any substantive vote on an amendment or any part of the draft resolution, the document becomes the property of the body and the friendly amendment process is no longer available. Any subsequent amendments must be voted on by the body to be incorporated into the resolution.
Formally submitted amendments should be written legibly, provide exactly what language is to be amended and identify where the current language exists in the draft document or where the newly proposed language should go.
Sample Amendment Sample Amendment
Resolution Introductory Phrases Resolution Introductory Phrases
The following phrases/words are a partial list of appropriate introductions in resolutions.
Preambular Phrases Preambular Phrases
(single verb in present participle or other introductory phrase):
| Affirming | Emphasizing | Keeping in mind |
| Alarmed by | Expecting | Noting with approval |
| Approving | Fulfilling | Noting with concern |
| Aware of | Fully alarmed | Noting with regret |
| Bearing in mind | Fully aware | Noting with satisfaction |
| Believing | Fully believing | Observing |
| Confident | Fully deploring | Reaffirming |
| Convinced | Guided by | Realizing |
| Declaring | Having adopted | Recalling |
| Deeply concerned | Having considered | Recognizing |
| Deeply convinced | Having examined | Seeking |
| Deeply disturbed | Having heard | Taking into consideration |
| Deeply regretting | Having received | Viewing with appreciation |
| Desiring | Having studied | Welcoming |
Operative Phrases Operative Phrases
(verb in third person present indicative tense):
| Accepts | Emphasizes | Reaffirms |
| Affirms | Encourages | Recommends |
| Approves | Endorses | Regrets |
| Authorizes | Expresses its appreciation | Reminds |
| Calls | Expresses its hope | Requests |
| Calls upon | Further invites | Solemnly affirms |
| Condemns | Further proclaims | Strongly condemns |
| Confirms | Further recommends | Supports |
| Congratulates | Further reminds | Takes note of |
| Considers | Further requests | Transmits |
| Declares accordingly | Further resolves | Urges |
| Deplores | Has resolved | Welcomes |
| Designates | Notes | |
| Draws the attention | Proclaims |
Lending Emphasis to Resolution Phrasing Lending Emphasis to Resolution Phrasing
Diplomatic communication relies heavily on connotation and nuance, and United Nations resolutions and decisions are no exception. When resolutions are constructed, they often contain language that actually conveys the very precise attitudes and intentions of the authors. At AMUN, representatives are urged to select words carefully when drafting resolutions. The introductory phrases listed above also carry significant emotional and diplomatic meaning. Accurate use of these introductory terms is of paramount importance at the United Nations, and should also be emphasized in AMUN simulations.
A more useful method for listing introductory phrases, rather than the alphabetical listing above, might be in order of the phrases’ emotional weight, described by United Nations practitioners as crescendos. Each of the following crescendos begins with a neutral phrase at the top (conveying little emotion) and concludes with a strongly worded phrase (conveying strongly positive or negative emotion). Some of these opening phrases also have common uses in the language of United Nations resolutions; when applicable, this information has been included parenthetically with each phrase. Some phrases that express strong insistence or negative emotion are typically only used in Security Council resolutions and even then are selected with great care—these are noted where appropriate.
Sample Preambular Phrase Crescendos Sample Preambular Phrase Crescendos
All lists of sample phrase crescendos presented below start with the most neutral/weakest phrase and end with the strongest phrases.
Noting (by being neutral, this term actually can connote negativity; for example, a resolution “noting the report of the Secretary-General” actually insults the Secretary-General’s work by not being more approving)
Noting with appreciation (this is the typical way to recognize a report or other document)
Noting with satisfaction
Noting with deep satisfaction
Alternatively, there can be further detail added to connote a more negative context for the point that is about to be made as shown in the following example:
Noting
Noting with regret
Noting with deep regret
Sample Operative Phrase Crescendos Sample Operative Phrase Crescendos
Notes (See comments on “noting” above)
Notes with appreciation
Notes with satisfaction
Welcomes
Recommends (suggests that other United Nations organs take an action)
Invites (suggests that Member States take an action)
Requests (suggests that the Secretary-General take an action)
Appeals (suggests that Member States take an action, more emotional)
Calls Upon (suggests that Member States take an action, very emotional)
Urges (strongest suggestion by the General Assembly)
Demands (rarely used outside of the Security Council)
Notes with concern
Expresses its concern
Expresses its deep concern
Deplores
Strongly deplores
Condemns (rarely used outside of the Security Council)
Commonly Misunderstood Terms Commonly Misunderstood Terms
Declares (used to make a statement)
Decides (used to indicate an action to be taken)
For sample usage of the phrases, see the Sample Draft Resolution and the Checklist for Resolution Formatting.
Security Council Presidential Statements Security Council Presidential Statements
While the General Assembly and other United Nations bodies usually speak through resolutions, the Security Council has another option: the presidential statement. At the United Nations, the Security Council adopts presidential statements more frequently than resolutions.
A presidential statement is a written statement issued by the President, noting that the Council has been discussing a specific topic and stating the general course of that discussion. These documents are frequently made at the beginning of or after a significant event in a crisis situation, but can be used at any point in the simulation. These statements can be as short as a sentence or two in length, but they can be longer if the situation dictates. Presidential statements are usually simple enough that they are agreed to by the entire body. This also means they often do not prescribe action and have little weight, unlike resolutions, which are technically binding on Member States. Presidential statements are often used when Members want to make a strong statement, but when one or more Member States, often Permanent Members, find it politically inexpedient to pass a binding resolution on the subject.
At AMUN, presidential statements are not written by the body’s President as they are at the United Nations in New York. Instead, presidential statements are written by the Council as a whole; the Council must enter an informal session and reach consensus to adopt a draft presidential statement. While draft statements, like draft resolutions, may be constructed by individuals or small groups during suspensions, AMUN recommends that representatives collaborate as much as possible on the creation of presidential statements and suggests entering into a consultative session for this purpose. For more information, please see Security Council Rule 7.7 Consultative Sessions.
Representatives are free to circulate unofficial drafts, but a draft statement cannot be adopted until it has been entered into the AMUN Document Processing System and has received approval by the Dais Staff and copies have been distributed to the Council. To adopt an approved draft statement, the Council must enter a consultative session. Once it appears consensus on the statement has been met, the president will ask if there is any objection to consensus on the document. If there are no objections to consensus, the statement will be adopted. If there are objections, the Council may wish to discuss the draft further and make changes. Once consensus is reached, the statement is considered adopted; the Dais Staff will update the document with any agreed to changes and copies of the final presidential statement will be made available to the Council.
Sample Security Council Presidential Statement Sample Security Council Presidential Statement